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By rhillyer, Tuesday, August 24, 2010, 1 commentsI finished writing my first full-length novel a year ago. Since then I've toyed with Chapter One until I no longer recognize it. I've flittered between making it more romancey, more women's fiction or more suspense. Suspense is winning.
Then I took a self-edit course at www.savvyauthors.com by Angela James. Wow. I use the word "just" many, many times more than the average.
Other words to search and destroy are listed below:
and
just
that
very
totally
so
and then
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